tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6892724110786617098.post6274733228842008757..comments2023-03-15T03:32:59.106-07:00Comments on Tinge of Turmeric: MICRO POETRYPervin Sakethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17151968399462860384noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6892724110786617098.post-42123027685774856812015-09-16T23:01:58.062-07:002015-09-16T23:01:58.062-07:00These aren't haiku poems. Haiku usually follow...These aren't haiku poems. Haiku usually follows a three line format with 5 - 7 - 5 syllables. Pervin Sakethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17151968399462860384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6892724110786617098.post-32255314106196613092015-09-16T05:39:42.424-07:002015-09-16T05:39:42.424-07:00Are these hiku poems ?Are these hiku poems ?umeshpatilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09129537708113740202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6892724110786617098.post-55354703954638171042012-06-27T23:31:37.566-07:002012-06-27T23:31:37.566-07:00Enjoyed, Pervin. Thirst is beautiful!Enjoyed, Pervin. Thirst is beautiful!shailysahayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06639492321350076703noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6892724110786617098.post-20971327831764018682012-05-15T22:48:41.284-07:002012-05-15T22:48:41.284-07:00Brilliant! And I agree with the the commentators ...Brilliant! And I agree with the the commentators above, Thirst and Aging are especially so.Rituhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01311661584182041901noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6892724110786617098.post-38380822661316097022012-05-12T01:07:19.553-07:002012-05-12T01:07:19.553-07:00Good ones Pervin, I liked Thirst,and also Aging......Good ones Pervin, I liked Thirst,and also Aging...I liked the interchange of black and white and the reference to colours, really nice.<br /><br />FehmidaFehmida Zakeerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09328082414123260908noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6892724110786617098.post-67004808893991366652012-05-09T22:54:11.133-07:002012-05-09T22:54:11.133-07:00Hey Shivani, good to hear from you! Thanks!Hey Shivani, good to hear from you! Thanks!Pervin Sakethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17151968399462860384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6892724110786617098.post-10163553219054257792012-05-09T22:53:47.127-07:002012-05-09T22:53:47.127-07:00Glad you enjoyed it, Abha. Thanks for stopping by!...Glad you enjoyed it, Abha. Thanks for stopping by!Pervin Sakethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17151968399462860384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6892724110786617098.post-86686057561505456382012-05-09T22:53:12.079-07:002012-05-09T22:53:12.079-07:00Thanks, Anil. I've often found myself drawn to...Thanks, Anil. I've often found myself drawn to certain sounds too. The s-sound is particularly mesmerizing. Glad you liked them.Pervin Sakethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17151968399462860384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6892724110786617098.post-41948233462109912742012-05-09T10:44:28.855-07:002012-05-09T10:44:28.855-07:00Very nice :)Very nice :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6892724110786617098.post-24527943139451711872012-05-09T03:37:49.435-07:002012-05-09T03:37:49.435-07:00Pervin, fine poems. 'Thirst' appealed to m...Pervin, fine poems. 'Thirst' appealed to me on several levels. First, it poses a question, and I like poems that do that. Second, it reminded me of Saranyu myth (she marries the Sun, can't bear his brilliance, etc. etc). Third, its full of soft sounds, or more precisely, sibilance. Finally, the interjection of 'also' (Do you also..). Unlike the sun, the lady is not in search of gentle hands (I suspect). but we wouldn't have known it hadn't she issued a languorous invite to the fierce blazing sun with that 'also'. Thx for posting.Anil Menonhttp://anilmenon.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6892724110786617098.post-31053506366668087852012-05-09T03:11:16.303-07:002012-05-09T03:11:16.303-07:00Yup, Thirst is nice!!Yup, Thirst is nice!!Shivani Mihirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02581393753181076450noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6892724110786617098.post-61114938286725313612012-05-09T02:56:34.745-07:002012-05-09T02:56:34.745-07:00Hi Pervin,
Thanks for the link. Enjoyed 'Thirs...Hi Pervin,<br />Thanks for the link. Enjoyed 'Thirst'.Abha Iyengarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17804103917796069764noreply@blogger.com